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You were like the pouring rain,
I was a sheet of writing,
And at the touch of the falling rain,
The ink was washed away.
My history erased.
So yes.....this poem can be taken in two different ways, I guess it depends on how you look at it. It could be sad, because the person has been erased. Or it could be happy, because the persons bad history is erased and has a fresh start.
:iconraindanceplz:.......
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:iconkereth-midknight:
Kereth-Midknight Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Writer
Never to be written on again! :?
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IRideAMagicalLadle Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes!
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Kereth-Midknight Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
:o
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pengirl100and2 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012   Writer
I was undecided on the feeling of this poem upon first reading it. It came off as almost melancholy, and then I saw the author's comment with a raindancing description, which is usually considered a happy action. Four lines, very powerful, and they make one think... anyways, it's lovely. Thank you for sharing.
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IRideAMagicalLadle Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the lovely comment! :)
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pengirl100and2 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012   Writer
You're very welcome~!
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yasdnilgoth Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Writer
This poem was sweet and since here in L.A is cloudy with a bit of showers, it fit perfectly in the atmosphere I'm experiencing. Oh, I just started a new project on my fanfic account. I started a fanfic in the Beauty and the Beast section because this idea came to me and I was undecided wether to write it or not. You see, I'm afraid that I may not keep the cast of the movie in character. But my ego encourage me to give it a shot and so I updated another story. I wasn't able to downloaded here in my deviantart. So, if you're interested in reading it heres the link: [link]. I hope you like it and chapter 2 is on the way and in progress;)
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IRideAMagicalLadle Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thats cool! I am going to have to check it out.:eager:
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Fatalitydragonrider Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
;^;
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IRideAMagicalLadle Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O_O please don't cry!
:hug:
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